Dear Sue,
I didn’t know that your Christmas started in Dec .25. Here, Christians are in minorities groups. Those gifts are not a help. They are for kindness. Maybe, gifts are congratulation for the New Year. Our government has represents of people. I think it is a beautiful work. It shows that Muslims’ love to other peoples have other religions and other ideas.
Take care,
Bahman
1 comment:
Hi Bahman, I'm glad to know that Christians are treated OK. A person's religion should not be a cause for persecution regardless of what country they are in.
Corrections:
1. sentences 1-4 OK.
sentence 5: Hi Bahman, I'm glad to know that Christians are treated OK.
Corrections:
1.Sentences 1-4 are OK. Sentence 5 " Our government has represents of people." I would write, "Our government representes all the people."
2. "It shows that Muslims’ love to other peoples have other religions and other ideas."
I would say, "It shows that Muslims (Plural, not possessive) love other people's (possessive) religions and ideas."
Good job, Bahman.
Your friend, Sue
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